Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starkid]

your first film huh?

this was very nice for your first. theres lots of room for improvement with this of course, but your showed good attention to detail. the reflections of light on the heroes face, from the star, was a nice touch. the music fit this perfectly and gave the animation an erie, uncertain feeling.

The graphics were quite nice and fit your animation pretty well.
ill look forward to seeing you improve and your future submissions as well.
if you need any help lemme know.

nice job and good luck!

[flinkys 19]

LOL! pretty funny

I loved how you had that naruto, the matrix, and FF parody in there. the graphics werent so great and the sound could be better quality, but it made me laugh! you maybe if you refined this style a little better, it could be a good flash.
nice job

diogoshx responds:

thanks man, the grapichs i have to upgrade when i have more time, the sound is not to good either is difficult to find "flash sounds" so i made my own...

what do you mean "refined this style a little better" i whant to know so next time i do better job,

[merry christmas from mr i]

for your first animation...

it shows a little effort, but maybe adding some length wouldnt hurt this too much.
nice try

mr-incon responds:

also using youre post to add there is a glitch that when it ends it plays the music again over the music already playing i could sortof fix this but then their would be no music covering the preloader and i like it that way

[Bob y Steve]

well i dunno....

if you put as much effort into your animation skills , as you did your endless dialogue, this would be pretty decent...then again, the dialogue wasnt so great.
and whats up with the fast random fast talking all of a sudden?

Starrz responds:

That alien is a geester. He does what he wants.

[Snow Day Play]

so true!

you nailed the whole "snow day" spirit. its fun till you gotta shovel.......and if you live in the midwest right now thats all youve been doing...sigh

[.The Interview.]

well..

i liked the concept you were going for here. but it couldnt hurt to add some dialogue next time. also.. if your concerned with people understanding the plot, or if you feel you have to explain more than you should, then maybe you should work out the plot so that you dont need to explain anything.. overall, it did make me laugh. : )

keep up the good work

Dj-Brand0 responds:

I would've had a better plot if i spent more time on this, but really I only did this over a week when I should've done it over about 3 or 4 weeks.

My fault and ill suffer for it.

Thanks for the review though, glad I made you laugh. ;D

[Cheese Sandwich]

you forgot something...

wheres the cheese bitch!!! ?

[Sonicchronicles interview]

like a breath of fresh air..ahhh

that was awesome! I had my doubts, especially with the "generic start button".lol but this was pretty funny stuff. I couldnt stop laughing. I love how you made it dark.. good work. keep it up!

[Mozz Travels 3]

just who exactly are the critics?

umm. im not sure what your going for here, but the only real traveling i experienced from this is when i went to click on the 1 , 2 , 3 , or 4. . add a little more depth and realism...and perhaps an actual destination? just a thought. and nice try

Orangebeef responds:

thanks

[Blue Hero]

that was pretty interesting

I will admit I had my doubts, but after the first 30 seconds I started to get into it. Im guessing your probably a little bit new to flash, but I will say that Im glad you put some effort into this.
just a few suggestions-
maybe add some arm or legs to the blue blob thingy.. and if not at least give him/her a face.
also some soud effects would be nice. and maybe make the physics a little more realistic. eg.. he attacks an enemy and the enemy goes flying and bounces of the wall or something..
good job overall! keep up the good work : )

pplaskota responds:

thanks for saying the truth