Stobak's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[5 Alive]

this has good potential

and you have a really fresh concept.
just a couple things:
the music was pretty upbeat and kept this alive, but the game was too slow paced.
it took way to long for this to get challenging.
a change of scenery would be nice also.

good job overall

agitatedferret responds:

Im going to take your advice to heart and speed the game up a little. Edit: Just sped up the pacing. The game gets more challenging nearly twice as quickly now.

[SpaMeSh 2.0]

a nice concept

but the execution could use some work. I understand the idea of reversing the controls on the rocket, but it made it insanely difficult. a better idea would have been to keep the controls simple (eg. . press up to go up, and down to go down, etc.) and to have some kind of device you could aim, using your mouse, and use that to point and shoot at the asteroids. then you could balance the difficulty by adding more obstacles and a time limit per level.

nice try overall..

HUNtalented responds:

Hm... I was trying to make a game, that is like no one in the world. If I changed the control, and the game type into a Shoot 'Em up, it would be like any other space shooting game. But thanks for the comment.
P.S.: Sorry if my English $uck$! :D

[Crazy Labyrinth Game]

so frustrating!!

ill give you points for addicting me to this. but its incredibly difficult.
here are some suggestions:

maybe you could keep the passages wide enough, but compensate by adding a time limit? and maybe you could earn medals, or awards, for beating certain times?

those are just a few.

otherwise. great job!

MasterMeCash responds:

thx .... but if i make a time limit, everyone will cheat (well, everyone who can ^^)

[Railway Valley]

your definately on to something

This game has tremendous potential, and i applaud your obvious effort. The only problem is that there should be an easier way to regulate the flow of trains. also i was unsure of where to actually send the newer trains. It doesnt actually direct me on where they need to go.
youve done an awesome job otherwise, and with a little more fine tuning and polish, this could be an awesome game. keep up the good work, and good luck!

flazm responds:

Thank you! Will take your comment into account for RV2

[blob-a-gotchi v3]

my blob sucked

or maybe it was just me. i dont really know what all your suppose to do, partly because you couldnt be bothered to give a decent tutorial on how to raise the damn thing. but I understand , somewhat, what you were going for. the music was off as well. maybe slow down the flow of time and add a help button if you dont know whats going on, wich is most of the time. nice try though!

piggy123 responds:

thanks i will

[Snowman Match]

hehe this was pretty amusing

i liked this alot for some reason. the music was soothing, with a nice upetty beat to it. and i didnt think id have so much fun drawing lines....
fyi..i got the high score. "STACY" is the man

MaxManning responds:

Thanks for checking it out and congrats on the high score!

[Orange Runner]

not bad for a first

you did pretty good for this being your first flash.
this is a great time waster.
a couple suggestions.
1. some kind of invincibility bounus would be nice if your doing well (temporary of course)
2. Maybe a few different modes or challenges.
otherwise, great game

Maxwelldoggums responds:

The sequel will have a separate Race Mode instead of having it bundled with the game. Thanks for your review!