Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skate Katy Skate]

The sound was scratchy, the animation was pretty jarring, and the art could use a lot of work. It appears as if shes skating on open air. Its great you paid attention to detail on her gross face, but the rest of this animation suffers from lack of that same attention. Add a preloader, to kill the loop, and slow this down. Keep practicing.

flipshoe responds:

Thanks for the great critique Stobak! And yeah, I agree it needs lots of work (meant as a practice before bigger and hopefully better toons). Keep watching for new 'uns and happy 2013 bud.

[Boxed in]

I actually enjoyed this! Some suggestions:
The stick figure moves pretty clumsily, and could have been animated with more fluidity. Adding sound would have made this much better also. Overall, you did good. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll get better.

[Hey Man]

Good lip-syncing and appropriate style of body movement..Only this wasnt funny, and got boring after the 3rd or 4th "man".

[Sonic vs Sega Rematch]

While this was a unique idea in itself, I felt it could have been done better. The SEGA logo barely seemed to fight back, and Sonic really didnt use many attacks. However, I did like the sound fx. Good job overall.

Shadic15 responds:

Simply put, it's very short, isn't it? It was a small project anyway. Thanks for reviewing ^^

[Conviction~~Episode 2]

While its nice that theres some dialogue, it progresses a bit clumsy. The animation moved more like a slideshow. If your going to do something in the style of Krinkels, study his work a bit more. You'll noticed there is always something moving, regardless of the situation.. nice job otherwise

[Apple meeting]

This was great! It perfectly sums up Apple's marketing strategy. Had you animated this with more color and detail, this could have easily been a top contender..Nice job otherwise

Uppercut1021 responds:

Yeah i was trying to do a sketchy styled animation but for my next projects i will definitely up the quality thank you for the criticism !

[Behind the Screens]

I really like your style! I just wish this was longer and had a bit more substance to it. . Not sure why anyone would have been offended though.

JaceC responds:

Thank you very much!

There is something like this, longer, but not having much impact (well, basically not entertaining). Check it out somewhere in my profile!

[The Avenger Part 1]

nice fight sequence and sound effects. The stick figures could have been animated with more polish though. The moves are a bit clunky, and clumsy at times. Add a preloader next time.

[An Ad for Newgrounds]

Though the concept of this is nice, It felt a bit boring. The sound effects didnt seem to fit either. Try doing another where you sound more excited. Some special effects and short clips of popular flash submissions would be a really nice touch also. . . just some ideas. Good luck with the contest! : )

VioletVulpine responds:

There were no sound effects.
If I used clips from movies the quality would be low or the filesize huge.

[Facebook I Used to Know]

Awesome parody! I think this is something everyone can relate to. The animation style was appropriate and was in sync with the music. Great job!

JadeArcade responds:

Thank you very much, Stobak! :)