Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ASA - My Friend Slender]

That was great! Awesome sound quality, and great pacing. I found it pretty funny. I look forward to your next one! : )

[The cartoon maker]

Well.. For starters I would suggest using a preloader..I also dont understand a few other things. You've made Dozens of flash movies, but your not improving at all. Your tweened animations are crude, and the sound quality is pretty bad. My advice is to try putting a sincere effort into your next animation. Some funny jokes wouldn't hurt as well.

flashmakeit responds:

I am glad you are paying attention to my work and I will read more about tween and bones. Maybe I will try some voice actors audio for my next flash. Thank you for the advice.

[BITCH AWAY!]

I like the concept, but the jokes werent all that funny.. Your animation itself is pretty decent, and your style is unique. Some polish would be nice in some parts. Good job overall.

[Flash final poject]

So what exactly was the project? And what was the purpose of this animation? Its a simple one-two punch fight scene, with a few seconds of music.. The options and "password" buttons hardly seem necessary as well.

Res0nance responds:

It was just a demonstration of what I had learned over the course of the semester. I could have done more with a longer work period (around 2/3 weeks) and coding the password buttons took longer than I expected. Speaking of, did you try the buttons on the password menu?

[Motley Mix]

Nice for your first. Congrats by the way, and welcome to the Flash community : )
I look forward to seeing your progress. Start experimenting with some frame by frame animation. Its tough, but the results you get will outshine any motion tweened animation.. Just a suggestion.

SFMF responds:

Thanks!

For the neckbeard scene where he turns, I actually made a Plasticine figure and rotated it, taking pictures, and then drew over them once uploaded in Flash.

[HOW I MET YOUR MOM PART 2]

I see what you did there!
I'm definitely of fan of parodies, and the x-men first class parody was the best..Especially the scene with Cookie Monster. lol. Friggin Brilliant! XD

[Link got stuck]

Loved it! I wish I had money for everytime I went threw the same crap on a Zelda game. Nicely done! : )

[ninja stuffs, first flash]

Not bad for your first flash!
Some suggestions:

1.Dont be afraid to speed up the movement. I'm sure your a Naruto fan..So we both know, they dont throw things that slow.
2.Polish up your environment a bit!
3. Experiment a bit with frame by frame animation. You have a pretty good handle of tweens , but now its time to try something different.

good job overall!

[Godzilla Rap: GG Animated]

The animation style was appropriate for the dialogue..Only this shouldnt have been rated E. He drops the F-Bomb several times, and the rating is a bit misleading.

Overall good job.

Cr1sisEntertainment responds:

Yeah, I check off the thing for some use of innappropriate language and it came up like this. I might have just missed something though. I'll check again.

Edit: Newgrounds originally gave me some error message when I first tried posting this, so when I refreshed it must have reset the rating thing. I must have missed it and forgot to make it teen. It's fixed now though.

[Announcement]

would have been nice to see more effort in this one....But good luck getting better! just keep practicing.