Stobak's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quiz Woody Quiz]

I got a score of 45...
Nice submission. Some suggestions I have:
Please provide some instructions for how to play the game. At the very least, provide instructions for how to move around. The music doesn't feel quite right.. Is it suppose to make me feel sad? I would also suggest adding some kind of penalty for choosing incorrectly, as you can pretty much just walk through everything until you choose the correct one.

dystralgame responds:

Others love music. It is an enchanted forest, and obsucre. Where each question is an enigma. If there is a wrong answer, you lose points (penalty). Otherwise, from experience, I know that people complain of punission more severe. Otherwise ... yes, you are in the dark forest puzzles. A little magic!

[Fast Man Hungry City]

Nice Concept. Some suggestions:
The controls are a bit clunky. I would suggest coming up with an easier way to catch food in the basket. Also, the placement of the basket and trajectory of the food dont seem to be consistant (e.g. I would catch something standing in one spot, but for some reason could not catch something else standing in the same spot). Overall it was a nice game.

[The Brawl 2 - Nicki Minaj]

Great sound, nice graphics, and awesome concept! She seems almost impossible to beat though...and the block doesnt seem to do much when she goes all out..but maybe that was your intention? nice job!

[Kill The Glove]

The glove never misses and the game is impossible.... The music is out of place, and the "glove" moves so quickly in the beginning you are guaranteed to die at least twice before figuring it out.

PoisonHeart responds:

The glove only misses as often as you don't avoid it. Jump straight up at the beginning. Appreciate the opinion on the music, and thanks for the review!

[Into Space 2]

Excellent Game!!!
I almost forgot to write a review..I'm pretty sure you stole an hour from my workday :)
The gameplay mechanics are excellent, and there is plenty of upgrades to keep this fresh. however, it would be nice to have a difficulty setting also. I would also balance out the upgrade prices as well..it seems to like a lot of work for some small payoffs here and there..Overall great game!!

[Orange Gravity 2]

Love the gameplay mechanics, and its very addictive. The puzzles are difficult without being frustrating, and the music is relaxing. Nice Job!

[Windows XP Errors 2]

I'm really not sure what to think.

I think everyone gets it now. You like to bash Windows XP for fun. Thats ok, but the jokes should at least be funny. Most of the error messages were completely random, and not even culturally relevant. some suggestions:

Funnier Jokes
Better graphics (i'm sure you can find some windows XP sprites somewhere that would look better)
better Music

I understand what you were trying to do. You may have hoped that the error message jokes would be hilarious...well they werent, so maybe its time to try something different? Maybe try bashing on Mac or on a celebrity.. Good luck.

TheMadWasp responds:

Yeah, I like Windows parodies (or any Operating System being "bashed")
The errors, I admit, were kinda random and made-up, I didn't have brilliant ideas.

I can do really realistic XP Icons, I have done before but and if you look at Windows RE you'll see those things.
I was thinking of doing a Mac parody , but I don't have a working mac error generator.
Thanks for the feedback.
-Madjasper1

[Alien Teleportation]

really nice concept

the only gripe i have is the boring music. it was fun and i made it pretty far.
also, the freaking ad keeps popping up whenever i go to hit the reset button. its extremely annoying and takes away from an otherwise well thought out game.

nice job

[Artist's guide to the Gun]

nicely done

the funny thing is. im doing the concept art for a flash im working on right now. the main character is holding a crudely drawn gun, as ive little knowledge of gun mechanics to begin with. Then magically, theres a new flash in the portal titled "The Artist's Guide To The Gun". lol. perfect timing. youve given me the confidence to go back and work on the concept art, and maybe add a few suprises to the gun. This guide was very indept and easy to follow. Thanks alot for this! i owe ya.

StealthBeast responds:

Hm... "youve given me the confidence to ... add a few suprises to the gun."

You know what, that gets me thinking though. Might not have been a bad idea if I created an "accessories" section, teaching people how to trick out their guns with lasers, suppressors, handgrips, and the like.

I'd love to see your flash. If you feel so inclined, PM it me the link when it gets completed.

[The Breach]

awesome game

im gonna take a shot in the dark here..but im guessing youve watched the movie "Event Horizon" ?? . . not the most original plot. but it was fun!