Stobak's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goodgame Poker]

excellent poker game

you absolutely nailed texas holdem! awesome job. this is flawless.
the only suggestion i could make is probably adding some kind of music in the background or something.

good job

[Sonic Scene Creator V.1]

could be a bit better

since this is your first, i wont be hard on this. the biggest thing i would fix is the size of your stage. its way too small, and the zoom in feature blows it up so close that you cant scroll. i would add some different scenery options in the future. and maybe some interactions other than just click and drag.

overall nice effort!

[Heal-A-Mole]

nice take on this classic

interesting skills, interesting stragegies, and a good sense of humor.
good job!

[Asha's Adventures: Escape]

very innovative

my biggest complaint was the lack of music. it was too quite and almost erie. the puzzles where insanely hard. you may wanna tone down the difficulty a little and provide more detailed instructions on how exactly to interact with certain objects. maybe clues?

overall nice job

[Sick Leave]

very decent game

the music fit this pretty nicely.
maybe make the powerups a little more detailed, and possibly add some more effects. otherwise i definately think you should add levels since its obvious you have a good understanding of how a sidesroller should look and feel.

good job!

[BattleSmile]

this game has potential

i love the concept, as im a huge battleship fan.
just some suggestions:
the sound fx were a little annoying when clicking on the map and going back.
also it seems more effecient to just bomb random squares, instead of searching for enemies and potentially losing your ship.
you should add a feature where the enemy actually fights back.
and theres a few grammar mistakes i would fix to make it look better.
but overall , nice job!

[the bombers of matroon]

i shot everything..

but now i feel empty inside.. i dunno, maybe its because theres no score? or maybe its because im not sure im getting anywhere? who can say....

[Marble Zombies: Beginning]

could be a lot better

you have a lot going on, and your programming is solid. the biggest let down is the actual graphics. if you polished up your sprites a lot better, then people could appreciate this more.

nice job though!

[Forest Encounter]

i enjoyed this a little

i think you have a really good concept here that shows a lot of promise.
heres a few suggestions for improvements:
polish the graphics, or sprites a little better,
make the reload time on the cannons a little shorter
add an upgrade system where you earn money you can spend
and maybe change the scenery to something a little more pleasing to the eye.

maybe im just being picky, but i like this idea and hope to see a future improvement.

nice job!