Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Funnez Movie]

Not bad. Some of these were actually pretty funny. I'm a bit confused though.. Some of the good dialogue you did have was smothered, for lack of a better word, by poor animation. You even openly admit, in your author comment, that you would "put more work" into your next animation...My question to you is Why didn't you put more work in this time? Why not wait until this was polished more before submitting? This was good, but unfinished.. Looking forward to your next one.

[OwenTV: Night Shift]

Is this your first submission? If so, its not bad!
Great job synchronizing the voices and facial movements. I would suggest maybe improving the art a bit, but its not too bad. I would also invest in a decent mic for vocals..I can tell this is a case of hardware and not necessarily your voices. I look forward to your next episode!

[Little Dummy Final]

Nicely done!
I dont see much typography animation anymore, so its refreshing to see something like this. It would be nice to see some variation though. Most of this is simply sliding from one word to the next. I felt you could have done much more with the type if you wanted to..You obviously know what your doing. Take this for example http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /558516
Overall, good job!

[Pegasus Shoes]

Not bad!
Its pretty solid for a parody. I like your particular style of animating, and it looks like you have some of the basics down. But it looks like you can use some refinement also. Some of your objects, like the falling stick, move very "clunky"..It could be a lot smoother with some touch ups. Hope you got a good grade on your project! : )

[Willie D Toons part 2]

After seeing some of your other stuff, I have some suggestions. Why dont you try animating more body movement? Most of these are a series of stills with minor lip-syncing...and some of it is relatively poor. Though its great you continue to put out submissions, it would be much better if you practiced some frame-by-frame basics. Your art style is also very inconsistent. Some backgrounds look amazing, yet others look like they were done in MS Paint. Your characters are also drawn very inconsistently..Unless your going for the Squidbillies look, I would recommend new character designs. Again, you could benefit greatly with some more effort and practice.. Look forward to more.

RogersEntertainment responds:

These are my old episodes the brand new Episodes will upload until Friday sorry about the confusion

[Let's Dance Ezio!]

The animation and art style is nice..Only you really cant tell whats going on. I would get rid of the loop also. If this clip is suppose to announce your new series, then it would be a good idea to be a little more clear on your intent.. After-all, this is your one shot to make people care about your next few months of work... Also, I would invest in a decent mic for vocals. Looking forward

[Too Scared to Decide]

Haha.

Hate when that happens. I loved the animation in this. The colors, characters, setting, music and voices where great! only I felt it could have been a little longer. I get the joke, but it could have been much funnier. Not bad for 48hrs

CatFat responds:

Yeah we planned to make it alot longer, so it continued after the restaraunt, but realised it wasn't a realistic goal within the amount of time we had :P
Thanks!

[Unfortunate Boy - Park]

Well,

Seeing as how this is your second animation, I went back and watched your first one.. Just wanted to see if you had made any improvement. Unfortunately, your not showing much progress. My advice would be to experiment a bit more with frame by frame animation. Tweens are great, but only when used correctly.. For example, the shape tween you used where the "unfortunate boy" got pecked to death..That could have looked MUCH better.

Keep trying! I look forward to see your next one. If you ever need any help, please let me know.

All4Flash responds:

Thanks for the advice! :)

[BAF: Bricks Are In Love]

starcraft fan huh?

I love your art and shading of the characters. However, the excessive use of motion tweens really hurts this. Also, I imagine an "episode" should be more than 20 seconds long. nice try..loved the starcraft reference.

Gerkinman responds:

Motion easing is fine when used well, which obviously it isnt in this flash, as there is no easing, followthrough or anticipation. Hopefully my newer work will look much better.

[Asian Doritosss!!!]

I dont understand...

How this made it into the All-time list.. but I have an idea. If you put as much effort into your animations as you did organizing a bunch of noobs to vote 5 on this, you might have had something here... seriously, your doing Newgrounds a disservice with your SPAM. earn your place just like everyone else here.