Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happily Ever After]

Nice overall. But the game gets repetitive and boring pretty quickly. The pattern pretty much stays the same. Seat, Gift, Food, Dance...Over and over.

[WT: Batman Tokes]

I like it!
nice style of animation and lip-syncing. Though it wasnt very funny, the voice acting was great. Look forward to more!

[Join Goomba Army]

I'd say its not bad for your first one. Congrats on your first animation!
I would advise you to make future submissions a bit longer. Also, slow down the text towards the end so we have time to read it. Nice job!

qualcugu responds:

thanks for the feedback :)

[crown capital management1]

I'm not sure what your intention was here..but the text is so pixelated and grainy, that you cant make sense of it..And even if you could, the text is playing much too quickly to get the gist of whatever it is your trying to say.

[Jason&Michael's day off]

I had a good laugh at the suprise ending. Well thought out and executed nicely! The film grain effect was a nice touch, and the music set the mood perfectly. Great job!

YULFO83 responds:

Thanks so Much :)

[Project A.N.G.E.L.]

Well.. Even though you uploaded this just to show friends, you should definately finish it. Sounds like it could have been awesome, if you gave it another shot.. Any plans for finishing this?

[Coyote and Rattlesnake: No Evil 005]

And what a story that was! xD
Excellent job with this piece! It was charming and funny. You did an awesome job interpreting this folk tale, and actually made me care about what was going on. The artwork, character designs and animation were very fluid and convincing. I look forward to your future work!

[Nature Walk]

Love the characters, and love your style. My biggest gripe is the voices, however. It would help to balance out the dialogue with all your other sounds, so I'm not required to turn up my speakers. The sound fx were nice otherwise. Good job!

[Lame Punch]

I've been sorting through some pretty bad animation lately, so yours was a pleasant suprise. You have a very unique style, and you capitalize on it pretty well. The movements of your characters were very fluid and natural. Bravo!

Maybe this was meant to be short, but I felt it could have used much more substance. . Not sure what, but it felt unfinished.

Congrats on your first musical score..To be completely honest, it could have been better. It really threw off everything else and didnt quite fit the mood. Overall, I feel you did a very nice job. I look forward to your future submissions.

[Party!]

Overall it wasnt to bad..
The music was enjoyable, and fit perfectly..Nothing like a piano to highlight the horror that is to come : )
However, a lot of your artwork could use some polish. I noticed you use a lot of gradients. Gradients are a sin when it comes to artwork, and should be used sparingly. the animation was also very choppy in some parts. Like i said before, not to bad but could definitely use some improvement.

TimFelt responds:

Gradients are great for flash, why not use it, its not like i'm drawing on paper it adds a great detail,
thanks for the overall, as for the music you should comment on it too, if you liked it, i know my artwork is a little weird but that's because i still need more practice, but thank you!