Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unused Persona Monsters]

Good colors, voice over was excellent quality, and interesting overall. The inbetweens could have been smoother though. Good job

PorkStrike responds:

Thanks very much. I'll definitely try to work on the inbetweens more on my future projects.

[Jump Vs Jump Op]

Though I enjoyed the music a bit. This is nothing more than poorly tweened clip art. Try a bit harder next time.

CityHunterKaioh123 responds:

Ya I know Thanks bro
And it is by flash

[Monster hunter the Tour]

Great job on your attention to detail! especially in the battle sequence. However, the dialogue was a bit lacking. It was like I was waiting for a punchline that never came :(

NCH responds:

guess leeroy is too tired of his misfortunes to come up with anything witty.

the whole animation was pretty much a tribute to the new pokemon XY with monster hunter as I almost over-spend my time on the battle scene. hence the weak ending.

but thanks for the review!

[Buddies - Ep. 1 (Part 3)]

Love the jokes, and style of animation. The dialogue was good, and the art is very reminiscent of Aqua Team Hunger Force. Nice job!

ShotgunSandwichENT responds:

Ha! Cool, I love ATHF! Or whatever it's called now, lol. Long live Carl!

[Magus Diptera]

That was impressive for only one minute! What was the purpose of the assignment?

DieterTheuns responds:

Thanks, and well, to tell a story in 1 minute. It is surprisingly difficuilt.

[It's Just Science]

I'm really diggin the style of animation! I just wish this had a good punch line at the end..It feels like it ended way too quickly. I enjoyed the voice overs, though. Good job!

Aqlex responds:

It was definitely short, I do agree, but who knows, maybe I'll return to these characters with something longer one day? I'm glad you enjoyed the style and the voice acting though! I do agree, the punchline wasn't very...punchy =P. I shall work on that.

[Moon Horse 4: The Conq...]

This was way too short..If your trying to tell a story, then at least put the effort into it. The animation style was subpar, and is in desperate need of some color. Your choice to end these abruptly and "shroud" your play button does not demonstrate style or purpose..Its just sloppy. The abrupt ending would work if it made sense..It doesnt. The same goes for the play button. No one should have to look for the button that gets your flash started.. I hope to see some improvement in your next one.

falling responds:

You probably shouldn't watch the next one then. I make these for fun and for my friends in like 30 minutes for a laugh. Regardless, an animation doesn't "need" color. And the whole thing is sloppy. That's kind of it's deal. Calm down man, this is obviously a fun bull shitty cartoon.

[AGAIN]

Nice for something you did in one night. Some suggestions:
Pay attention to how your sticks move, and make it more fluid. Everything seemed to play very slowly. Experiment with easing and natural movement. Looking forward to your next one.

JspidermanP responds:

Thanks, I am very quickly realizing how hard it is to make stick animations look good. I was trying to make his climb look labored due to all the water working against him so I wanted it to look a bit slow, but I know what you mean, it does look very choppy. Thanks for the advice and I will work harder on his next round of training to make it look a lot smoother.

[KTK NY Catastrophe Part 2]

You have a very unique and interesting style of animation. I was a bit confused though..Sometimes the lip-syncing and body movements were done very well ( like when they were asking combo jr to leave) and other times it was done poorly.. Try being a bit more consistent with your art work. Its easier to notice the flaws in an animation, when the quality keeps shifting between good and bad.. Looking forward to your next one.

Kombothekid responds:

thank you so much! :)

[Skate Katy Skate]

The sound was scratchy, the animation was pretty jarring, and the art could use a lot of work. It appears as if shes skating on open air. Its great you paid attention to detail on her gross face, but the rest of this animation suffers from lack of that same attention. Add a preloader, to kill the loop, and slow this down. Keep practicing.

flipshoe responds:

Thanks for the great critique Stobak! And yeah, I agree it needs lots of work (meant as a practice before bigger and hopefully better toons). Keep watching for new 'uns and happy 2013 bud.