Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[bitmuch]

this was entertaining

the length of the flash could be longer, but i think your art style made up for a lot. the whole monochromatic theme you have going on would be an excellent style for you to nuture. good job!

[A Mario Adventure]

very decent for your first

for your first sprite flash you did a good job.
here are some suggestions:
1)try and clean up your sprites a little bit. a little polish will go a long way
2)when mario would hit a block, it would bounce up and come back down but not land in the same place it was before. if you use rules you can be more precise when doing an animation like this... i had to learn that on my own : )
3) when mario was speaking, not only was it hard to read the text but it went too quickly. try using word bubbles and letting the text hang in the timeline for awhile so people can read what hes saying.
4)now that youve got your feet wet, try adding some good sound effects that gives it more of a Super Mario feeling.

i know this is a lot but you got potential for this. keep up the good work and i look forward to seeing more!

[Terminator Infiltration]

i laughed pretty dam hard!

LOL! nice one. you nailed the Terminator theme, but it was short.............. i Kidd! i Kidd! awesome job. even though it was short it made me laugh.

great job!

BenFella responds:

Sweet! Someone got a laugh outta it!

[f@mily]

pretty funny stuff

i almost BLAMD this until i saw the text at the end! LOL thats classic.
good job!

MiracleFruitClock responds:

yes 1 line of text usually makes all of my movies

[Janurary Third 2010]

nicely done

you definately win points for creativity here. i never thought id see the day where i didnt BLAM a flash that consisted of just text. the music fit nicely and this was pretty epic.

my only complaint is that it was a little difficult to see what was going on sometimes.

Awesome job!

LotusClock responds:

Creativity is the name of the game. I see how it could have been hard to follow, but I used flashy colors to help locate the ships and laser beams. It's still edible.

[3 Inches - Prologue PartD]

i really liked this

this has a lot of promise, but i would definately find someone to help you with the english, or translation. it takes away from this alot if its in broken english. Some of the graffitti subtitles were a little hard to read also.
otherwise i enjoyed the music and the way this was presented.
i look forward to the next episode!

[Mario's Happy Hour]

that was unexpected..

though it was a little funny. it could be helped by extending it a minute or two.

[LoZ: I-Pod of doom]

that was pretty funny

it took me awhile to figure out that link was wearing an i-pod. i was like "why is he chopping everyone up?" lol.
nice job overall. maybe you could make the animation a little smoother in the future though.

[Half-Life For The Win]

brought back some memories..

i love the half-life series, and this was a pretty decent tribute. the soundtrack is nice. But, what exactly is suppose to be going on? ..just a question.
also, your frame by frame is very smooth and solid.
i would add just a little bit more polish to the graphics.
otherwise, nice job!

[The New Year]

long live the clock crew

this was nicely concieved, and makes me want to go back and watch clock crew..........what exactly is "forum drama"?...

nice job!

Topcatyo responds:

It's drama.

On the forums.