Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic vs Sega Rematch]

While this was a unique idea in itself, I felt it could have been done better. The SEGA logo barely seemed to fight back, and Sonic really didnt use many attacks. However, I did like the sound fx. Good job overall.

Shadic15 responds:

Simply put, it's very short, isn't it? It was a small project anyway. Thanks for reviewing ^^

[Apple meeting]

This was great! It perfectly sums up Apple's marketing strategy. Had you animated this with more color and detail, this could have easily been a top contender..Nice job otherwise

Uppercut1021 responds:

Yeah i was trying to do a sketchy styled animation but for my next projects i will definitely up the quality thank you for the criticism !

[Behind the Screens]

I really like your style! I just wish this was longer and had a bit more substance to it. . Not sure why anyone would have been offended though.

JaceC responds:

Thank you very much!

There is something like this, longer, but not having much impact (well, basically not entertaining). Check it out somewhere in my profile!

[An Ad for Newgrounds]

Though the concept of this is nice, It felt a bit boring. The sound effects didnt seem to fit either. Try doing another where you sound more excited. Some special effects and short clips of popular flash submissions would be a really nice touch also. . . just some ideas. Good luck with the contest! : )

LapisLapines responds:

There were no sound effects.
If I used clips from movies the quality would be low or the filesize huge.

[Facebook I Used to Know]

Awesome parody! I think this is something everyone can relate to. The animation style was appropriate and was in sync with the music. Great job!

JadeArcade responds:

Thank you very much, Stobak! :)

[creeper heaven]

This had the potential to be very funny! It would have been nice to see more polished graphics and a bit more planning. I had to admit I laughed a bit on the "heaven" part.

richard191 responds:

ye i should have spent more time on this, but thanks for the three

[Thing I did when bored]

This s a lot of content for something you did in one night... However, this seems to be a case of quantity over quality. Generally, anything that took you a day or less to create probably isnt worth submitting yet. Some improvements I'd like to see next time: A solid theme, polished frame by frames, attention to detail, and better sound/music quality.

LFL responds:

I confess! There were a scene or two I stole from uncompleted animations, thats why its so random XP.

[X vs Deoxys]

Well done on getting all the sprites to move naturally! I would recommend speeding things up a bit though. I was also expecting the classic Megaman death also :( .. The one with all the circles coming out of him when he dies.

Umbrarum responds:

Thanks fo the tips.
I didn´t find the "circles" when he dies and i wouldn´t like to draw them. So i put this one that is more dramatic.

[French Insults]

Nice lip-syncing and animation. Good luck with the contest! :)

JadeArcade responds:

Thanks Stobak! :)

[DayZ Basically]

This idea had promise, and you have some obvious potential and talent ( especially with the voice acting ). However, I would expect more from something you spent about 24hrs on. . looking forward to your future submissions.

WooleyWorld responds:

It was 4 hours. :3
This was a response to yesterday's "Mine Mine Minecraft" which, even after trying and putting a lot of love into, got crap reviews. So I made a crappy short that took no skill and little talent to create in a very small time span because I was tired of spending time on shit that went nowhere. Hence this exists.
That and I like DayZ.
But yes I see what you're saying. :]