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[Jason&Michael's day off]

I had a good laugh at the suprise ending. Well thought out and executed nicely! The film grain effect was a nice touch, and the music set the mood perfectly. Great job!

YULFO83 responds:

Thanks so Much :)

[Party!]

Overall it wasnt to bad..
The music was enjoyable, and fit perfectly..Nothing like a piano to highlight the horror that is to come : )
However, a lot of your artwork could use some polish. I noticed you use a lot of gradients. Gradients are a sin when it comes to artwork, and should be used sparingly. the animation was also very choppy in some parts. Like i said before, not to bad but could definitely use some improvement.

TimFelt responds:

Gradients are great for flash, why not use it, its not like i'm drawing on paper it adds a great detail,
thanks for the overall, as for the music you should comment on it too, if you liked it, i know my artwork is a little weird but that's because i still need more practice, but thank you!

[Too Scared to Decide]

Haha.

Hate when that happens. I loved the animation in this. The colors, characters, setting, music and voices where great! only I felt it could have been a little longer. I get the joke, but it could have been much funnier. Not bad for 48hrs

CatFat responds:

Yeah we planned to make it alot longer, so it continued after the restaraunt, but realised it wasn't a realistic goal within the amount of time we had :P
Thanks!

[Unfortunate Boy - Park]

Well,

Seeing as how this is your second animation, I went back and watched your first one.. Just wanted to see if you had made any improvement. Unfortunately, your not showing much progress. My advice would be to experiment a bit more with frame by frame animation. Tweens are great, but only when used correctly.. For example, the shape tween you used where the "unfortunate boy" got pecked to death..That could have looked MUCH better.

Keep trying! I look forward to see your next one. If you ever need any help, please let me know.

All4Flash responds:

Thanks for the advice! :)

[BAF: Bricks Are In Love]

starcraft fan huh?

I love your art and shading of the characters. However, the excessive use of motion tweens really hurts this. Also, I imagine an "episode" should be more than 20 seconds long. nice try..loved the starcraft reference.

Gerkinman responds:

Motion easing is fine when used well, which obviously it isnt in this flash, as there is no easing, followthrough or anticipation. Hopefully my newer work will look much better.

[Madness: Activation]

nicely done

you captured the essense of madness perfectly. its obvious you put lots of time, care and effort into this. awesome job!

hope to see more from you in the future.

tomtyke responds:

thanks, i did! :D

alot of pain as well, when suddenly, all of my feet sounds disappeared for no reason, lol flash is so buggy