Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Three Line Novel]

Not too bad, but maybe you should have at least finished it before uploading.. points for the animation and appropriate music, but way too short.

LCameron responds:

As said in the Author's comments, I had a fast aproaching deadline. It was a tad rushed towards the end, and I know I could have done a little better had I enough time. Thanks for watching though. :)

[The Jintheku]

Wow. I have to say that I'm very impressed. I can see that you have tremendous potential, and discipline when it comes to animation. Your story was engaging, The art and character design was unique, the voice of the narrator was perfect, and your cinematography was professional level.

The only big question I have is this. Was that choice of art style and lack of color what you were aiming for? This could have been a knock-out if you had more color in your environment or characters.. Whatever the case, I feel privileged to have seen this under judgement. You are very talented, and I'm eagerly awaiting your next piece. Please let me know if your ever interested in collaborating. Cheers! XD

AndrewM responds:

when the time comes ill definately let you know and thanks alot for your compliments...... they really do encourage me to go further with the story and cinematography concepts

[Happy Birthday Bre]

This was a charming gem among all the other crap I had to blam today. Sounds like shes a lucky girl : ) Great choice of music, and the style of animation fit nicely.. Though there were some parts that could have used some polish, your frame-by-frame skills are good. Nice Job!

TheSlightMutation responds:

Thanks! I definitely agree with you on the polish thing! But due to getting it done on time, I just had to make some quality sacrifices.

[Flash final poject]

So what exactly was the project? And what was the purpose of this animation? Its a simple one-two punch fight scene, with a few seconds of music.. The options and "password" buttons hardly seem necessary as well.

Res0nance responds:

It was just a demonstration of what I had learned over the course of the semester. I could have done more with a longer work period (around 2/3 weeks) and coding the password buttons took longer than I expected. Speaking of, did you try the buttons on the password menu?

[Godzilla Rap: GG Animated]

The animation style was appropriate for the dialogue..Only this shouldnt have been rated E. He drops the F-Bomb several times, and the rating is a bit misleading.

Overall good job.

Cr1sisEntertainment responds:

Yeah, I check off the thing for some use of innappropriate language and it came up like this. I might have just missed something though. I'll check again.

Edit: Newgrounds originally gave me some error message when I first tried posting this, so when I refreshed it must have reset the rating thing. I must have missed it and forgot to make it teen. It's fixed now though.