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[kisamis blue]

i see your familiar with the brush tool

you can do better than this... im gonna lean more towards "abit badd" for this. and you can do this with powerpoint also. ...im just saying cuz you seem to be into slideshows

cherryreichan responds:

ima begginer at flash animations so please give me a break, i am more of a MS paint animator!

[Tekken the Piss : Feng]

this was actually king of funny

but the subpar animation, and poor sound quality oFFenged me!
nice try

Rikimaru-Azlar responds:

the animation was indeed crude

[OOP_ TLOZ Forgot Legend 1]

this wasnt even a game.

well you obviously put a lot of effort into the storyline and dialogue....but if your going to have hours of text in a flash, shouldnt we at least be able to read it?
that was my biggest complaint......
according to your author's comment, im required to go fuck myself right now.
ill be right back..................

CubePanda responds:

Well that was... uhh... taken the wrong way? XD I don't know what you mean by not being able to read it, plus I didn't write it, and I know it wasn't a game, it's fan based.

[flinkys 19]

LOL! pretty funny

I loved how you had that naruto, the matrix, and FF parody in there. the graphics werent so great and the sound could be better quality, but it made me laugh! you maybe if you refined this style a little better, it could be a good flash.
nice job

diogoshx responds:

thanks man, the grapichs i have to upgrade when i have more time, the sound is not to good either is difficult to find "flash sounds" so i made my own...

what do you mean "refined this style a little better" i whant to know so next time i do better job,

[merry christmas from mr i]

for your first animation...

it shows a little effort, but maybe adding some length wouldnt hurt this too much.
nice try

mr-incon responds:

also using youre post to add there is a glitch that when it ends it plays the music again over the music already playing i could sortof fix this but then their would be no music covering the preloader and i like it that way

[Bob y Steve]

well i dunno....

if you put as much effort into your animation skills , as you did your endless dialogue, this would be pretty decent...then again, the dialogue wasnt so great.
and whats up with the fast random fast talking all of a sudden?

Starrz responds:

That alien is a geester. He does what he wants.

[.The Interview.]

well..

i liked the concept you were going for here. but it couldnt hurt to add some dialogue next time. also.. if your concerned with people understanding the plot, or if you feel you have to explain more than you should, then maybe you should work out the plot so that you dont need to explain anything.. overall, it did make me laugh. : )

keep up the good work

Dj-Brand0 responds:

I would've had a better plot if i spent more time on this, but really I only did this over a week when I should've done it over about 3 or 4 weeks.

My fault and ill suffer for it.

Thanks for the review though, glad I made you laugh. ;D

[Mozz Travels 3]

just who exactly are the critics?

umm. im not sure what your going for here, but the only real traveling i experienced from this is when i went to click on the 1 , 2 , 3 , or 4. . add a little more depth and realism...and perhaps an actual destination? just a thought. and nice try

Orangebeef responds:

thanks

[Blue Hero]

that was pretty interesting

I will admit I had my doubts, but after the first 30 seconds I started to get into it. Im guessing your probably a little bit new to flash, but I will say that Im glad you put some effort into this.
just a few suggestions-
maybe add some arm or legs to the blue blob thingy.. and if not at least give him/her a face.
also some soud effects would be nice. and maybe make the physics a little more realistic. eg.. he attacks an enemy and the enemy goes flying and bounces of the wall or something..
good job overall! keep up the good work : )

pplaskota responds:

thanks for saying the truth

[::the Prophecy::]

if you want to see...

a fat man licking licking what seems to be a cross before a dog and a racoon, then this movie is for you....
misleading descriptions are so 2008 bro.

UglyBirthLock responds:

AND FOR YOUR INFORMATION IT IS STILL 2008 FOR ANOTHER THREE DAYS