Stobak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DBZ RS ep. 3 Goku arrives]

Nice job on your submission.. I do have several suggestions though:

First- This is Dragon Ball Z. The only thing that should move fast and intense is the fight scenes... Not the dialogue. We are talking about the difference between DBZ and Speed Racer. Please slow it down so that I can actually read what they are saying.

Second - The sprites need to be animated with a bit more grace. The small fight with Frieza ended to abruptly.

Third - This is an animation using sprites..Therefore, please include more action and less dialogue. Did you ever watch DBZ just to hear them speak?

Good luck on your next one. I hope to see some improvement. :)

[We love you sandvich]

Why did I bother reading that, indeed..... -_-

This looks like it could have been funnier, and the artwork was very well done. A little more substance and length, and this could have easily been great.

[Thing I did when bored]

This s a lot of content for something you did in one night... However, this seems to be a case of quantity over quality. Generally, anything that took you a day or less to create probably isnt worth submitting yet. Some improvements I'd like to see next time: A solid theme, polished frame by frames, attention to detail, and better sound/music quality.

LFL responds:

I confess! There were a scene or two I stole from uncompleted animations, thats why its so random XP.

[X vs Deoxys]

Well done on getting all the sprites to move naturally! I would recommend speeding things up a bit though. I was also expecting the classic Megaman death also :( .. The one with all the circles coming out of him when he dies.

Umbrarum responds:

Thanks fo the tips.
I didn´t find the "circles" when he dies and i wouldn´t like to draw them. So i put this one that is more dramatic.

[Hey Friend]

The loop is annoying, and this isnt anything more than a few basic motion tweens. . I would recommend just saying "hello" to your friends in person next time.

[French Insults]

Nice lip-syncing and animation. Good luck with the contest! :)

JadeArcade responds:

Thanks Stobak! :)