The sprites were very well animated.. You shouldnt have given up though.
The sprites were very well animated.. You shouldnt have given up though.
This idea had promise, and you have some obvious potential and talent ( especially with the voice acting ). However, I would expect more from something you spent about 24hrs on. . looking forward to your future submissions.
It was 4 hours. :3
This was a response to yesterday's "Mine Mine Minecraft" which, even after trying and putting a lot of love into, got crap reviews. So I made a crappy short that took no skill and little talent to create in a very small time span because I was tired of spending time on shit that went nowhere. Hence this exists.
That and I like DayZ.
But yes I see what you're saying. :]
Some of the jokes were funny, but poorly drawn anime cleavage hardly makes up for anything.
As much as I enjoyed some of the decent animation.. Its really hard to get past the incomprehensible ranting and screaming..
Great first episode! Heres some suggestions:
Give the viewers a choice between english and spanish subtitles. I can read spanish just fine, but theres a lot of us who cant. I would recommend practicing frame by frame for your next submission. Your tweens and movie clips were very well done, but those will only get you so far. Good job!
"Of course, mom!..Thats why I came" lmao! that is hands down one of the best quotes ever. Loved the Nintendo references, and funny dialogue.
Very interesting story from the perspective of an interactive Christmas wreath.. I did laugh out loud to this, and it was pretty funny.
so i thought what id do is pretend i was one of those deaf mutes......
Age 89, Male
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some place at some time..
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